End of the World

“ The end of the world”

Planets are like just round balls
One day they all have to fall

Heaven or hell
That day angles would ring justice bells

Then we would be wordless
The life we started there would be timeless

The graves would rise again 
With a little hope of fame

Our deeds will be counted
Then we all have to be mounted

Sometimes I just wonder
How would I surrender

When the journey ends
With a clap of thunder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robertson Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 11:18 AM
WONDERFUL. I really like the rhythm, also the message.
Cresswell Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Welcome, I love poetry that makes me think and question. Yours has done just that. Well done.
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October 7, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Deep thought provoking first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Ajmal Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:39 AM
A very beautiful written poem, it really tells that our main purpose of life is to worship God and we should only focus on it, your message is really good nd it s really inspirational, seems like you re new here so I should welcome you to ps, you re definately gonna enjoy your time here, I also have similar poems, everything doesn t happen as we want it and once we all were child, I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and tell me how they are
Jalil Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:53 AM
You are right and thank you for your comment, I will surely read your poetry. Thanks for the support
White Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:47 AM
I like this interesting poem, it asks a question many of us are wondering about I think.... I think, in your fourth line you mean 'angels' instead of 'angles'? Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Jalil Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you very much, you are right about the spelling my computer auto corrected it, thanks again
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