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End of the world

“ The end of the world” Planets are like just round balls One day they all have to fall Heaven or hell That day angles would ring justice bells Then we would be wordless The life we started there would be timeless The graves would rise again With a little hope of fame Our deeds will be counted Then we all have to be mounted Sometimes I just wonder How would I surrender When the journey ends With a clap of thunder.

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Date: 10/18/2017 11:18:00 AM
WONDERFUL. I really like the rhythm, also the message.
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Date: 10/15/2017 8:56:00 AM
Welcome, I love poetry that makes me think and question. Yours has done just that. Well done.
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:54:00 AM
Deep thought provoking first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:39:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, it really tells that our main purpose of life is to worship God and we should only focus on it, your message is really good nd it s really inspirational, seems like you re new here so I should welcome you to ps, you re definately gonna enjoy your time here, I also have similar poems, everything doesn t happen as we want it and once we all were child, I ll really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and tell me how they are
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Afnan Jalil
Date: 10/7/2017 7:53:00 AM
You are right and thank you for your comment, I will surely read your poetry. Thanks for the support
Date: 10/7/2017 2:47:00 AM
I like this interesting poem, it asks a question many of us are wondering about I think.... I think, in your fourth line you mean 'angels' instead of 'angles'? Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Afnan Jalil
Date: 10/7/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, you are right about the spelling my computer auto corrected it, thanks again