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End of the Day

I could weep for rejection Or whine about loneliness But would it change anything? Bring me closer to happiness? No. Because at the end of the day My life isn't that bad. No matter the heartbreak Regardless how sad. I'm still alive Alive enough to pray That I can still smile At the end of the day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 8:55:00 AM
Hunter, great uplifting poem - I just wrote a rather extensive essay on how true happiness can only be found within - took me over 2,500 words to say what you said in about 50 - great job - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, mj
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Date: 5/20/2010 9:21:00 AM
Indeed. And there are always those worse off than we are. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. An inspiring write. Caroline.
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:34:00 PM
The eomtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:55:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Hunter. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:26:00 PM
heyy, your first poem always gets the most comments.. :) nicely done.
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Date: 4/29/2010 2:17:00 PM
i like the poem, it is very nice, has alot of words and things that people dont talk about very much. congrats, your poem has been added to my favorites, and you are 1 of my favorite poets. congrats. :) Jessica
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Date: 4/29/2010 2:11:00 PM
Thanks to everyone that posted so fast! My first poem and wasn't expecting any comments, much less so fast. I appreciate all the responses!
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:55:00 PM
a very nice read, love the air in this one,..p.d.
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:50:00 PM
very nice and sweet write welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:47:00 PM
Aw I like this. It's simple but it means so much. Nice write. :)
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