Hunter Ware Poet Rhyme

End of the Day

I could weep for rejection
Or whine about loneliness
But would it change anything?
Bring me closer to happiness?

No.
Because at the end of the day
My life isn't that bad.
No matter the heartbreak
Regardless how sad.

I'm still alive
Alive enough to pray
That I can still smile
At the end of the day.

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Michael Jordan May 21, 2010 at 8:55 AM Hunter, great uplifting poem - I just wrote a rather extensive essay on how true happiness can only be found within - took me over 2,500 words to say what you said in about 50 - great job - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, mj

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 20, 2010 at 9:21 AM Indeed. And there are always those worse off than we are. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. An inspiring write. Caroline.

May 19, 2010 at 4:34 PM The eomtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Janette Fisher May 18, 2010 at 11:55 AM Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2010 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Hunter. Love, Carol

Michaela Dowdy April 29, 2010 at 7:26 PM heyy, your first poem always gets the most comments.. :) nicely done.

Jessica Bateman April 29, 2010 at 2:17 PM i like the poem, it is very nice, has alot of words and things that people dont talk about very much. congrats, your poem has been added to my favorites, and you are 1 of my favorite poets. congrats. :) Jessica

Hunter Ware April 29, 2010 at 2:11 PM Thanks to everyone that posted so fast! My first poem and wasn't expecting any comments, much less so fast. I appreciate all the responses!

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2010 at 1:55 PM a very nice read, love the air in this one,..p.d.

Faleshia Murphy April 29, 2010 at 1:50 PM very nice and sweet write welcome to poetry soup faleshia

Destiny Budd April 29, 2010 at 1:47 PM Aw I like this. It's simple but it means so much. Nice write. :)