End of Season

Fritillary on
buds of my butterfly bush,
soon both will be gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 28, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Laney Betts, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 10, 2015 at 10:54 PM
LANEY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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October 3, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Lovely Haiku! Makes one think of the frailty of life. Nice!
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September 30, 2012 at 10:03 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Laney. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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September 22, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Very nice end of the season haiku.
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