End of Hope

Her being battles with her mind, These raucous rattles so unkind, Waging a war within her soul, Schizophrenic scar takes its toll, Dark depression, how will she cope? Confused confession, end of hope.
9th May 2023 For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size contest no. 63"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 8:42 AM
These raucous rattles so unkind…beats you up, gently… Congratulations, Joanna!
Turner Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 3:48 PM
It may be fictional but there is no doubt you understand what you are writing about, Joanna. Well penned!
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