"end It All"

A simple grave, a marker in time
Not in the ground, but your very mind
A complex riddle, woven into life
To see a dawn, of crimson tides
Not from a sunrise, but shattered lives
A woman stands, her hands held high
To praise her captor, that one that holds her
Not a man, nor a woman
A society watches, impious and unjust
Not to offer aid, not to do what it must

Every deity is wrong, every faith is misplaced
Every man a slave, every woman a servant
No government uncorrupt, no leader correct
No love to follow, no heart to mend
In the end we fall, in the end we falter
In the beginning we had a chance
In the beginning we had hope
Tomorrow is our last day
Today we gave up
Yesterday we still had a chance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 14, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Hi! Evan, "wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you with your title, ( end it all )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
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