End

there was once a light now it turns into darkness there was once a love now it turns into nothingness there was once a blessing now it is nothing but a curse there was once a beauty now it just looks so darn ugly there was once a serenity now it turns to madness completely there was once a sunflower now it died without notice there was once us. there was once only us now there is another, so it is only best, that i let you free. sorry.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/13/2025 10:29:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

Skat A

Date: 1/19/2016 12:34:00 PM

DEEP WRITE...LOVE IT