Eli Moon Poet Lyric

End

there was once a light
now it turns into darkness

there was once a love
now it turns into nothingness

there was once a blessing
now it is nothing but a curse

there was once a beauty
now it just looks so darn ugly

there was once a serenity
now it turns to madness completely

there was once a sunflower
now it died without notice

there was once us.

there was once only us

now there is another,

so it is only best,

that i let 

you

free.

sorry.

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rhaya artlyy September 14, 2026 at 10:43 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin January 13, 2025 at 10:29 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.

Skat A January 19, 2016 at 12:34 PM DEEP WRITE...LOVE IT