End

Sitting with a hopeful smile
No comfort found
Painful denial
Regret for a while
Love thought forever
Now just a thought
Not ready for the heartache
 your love has brought
Now it is over
So why pretend
Kill it quickly 
Rather than suffer til the end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Doll Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 3:41 PM
David, your poem captures the feel of a true love loss so truthfully.. Great write. Best~ Warren.
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May 9, 2020 at 11:52 PM
Nicely written tale of lost love, David. It has a pleasing rhyme scheme, too.
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