Enchantment of a Tower

Carve not a tower enclosing your heart 
Allow our breaths to play, let warmth prevail
Sabers fling across moors searching the grail; 
While armor of conquest tears us apart.

Unload all hardened marble in a barrow
How far one’s dauntlessness, how near one’s pride
A hallway of song waits as laughter abides
When ripened moment calls for love to glow.

In silken cape, you enchant the regal court
Yet lonely the man commanding alone;
Instead, let us scurry where moonlight roams
With dewdrops on our lips as we cavort.

Harken, weigh not the power you behold
A jester amuses only for a while;
But splendor of oneness lasts to beguile
Come, nurture our castle before life folds.



For Shadow Hamilton's 10th Contest Castle
by nette onclaud....2/1/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/5/2014 10:00:00 AM
Congrats nette.
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:36:00 PM
Innovation in thots makes you number one Nette, Creative masterpiece well expressed, Loved it,,,,,,hugs
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your top finish! Well done Nette.
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:07:00 AM
Nette, it's a pleasure to see your name on the top of the winners' list...as always your poetry enchants and inspires. Best wishes and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:00:00 AM
Very beautiful and rich write. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:05:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 2/3/2014 11:26:00 PM
congrats on your win
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Date: 2/3/2014 10:34:00 PM
lovely Nette congrats on 1st place ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 2/3/2014 8:15:00 AM
Amazing words. The richness of the emotions are tethered by the concrete image of the castle. With your line "let us scurry where moonlight roams" you invite everyone into the castle grounds. Love this one!
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:03:00 AM
awesome write, Nette, and a sure winner
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:43:00 AM
Outstanding one Nette; wish you gl in the contest. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:35:00 PM
I like how you focused on the tower part of the castle in the title but in the end, you bring in the nurturing of the whole castle. Enchanting words.
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:47:00 PM
"A hallway of song waits as laugher abides" Wow that is genius! Pure genius Nette! This is such an amazing poem! Great write! This one is going in my favorites. great write! :) xoxo
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:34:00 PM
Best poem I read for today!
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Date: 2/1/2014 4:24:00 PM
This is a truly worshipful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this enchanting poem here this evening! What a exceptional piece this one truly is Nette, so masterfully done! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/1/2014 2:23:00 PM
Elegant! A real classy piece filled to the brim with snippets of life and lessons of romance. Delightful poem from you! Soup mail.
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Date: 2/1/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Beautiful ... live life in love .. - Wishing you good luck in contest, hope you win Nette. - Good night, Sunday tomorrow :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2014 1:35:00 PM
Just want you to know I read this and love it nette..
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