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Enchanted Lake

rocks couch amid its clear blue water for maidens to sit...sing its marvelous wonder







©2016Leonora Galinta
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Feb. 21, 2016 1.30am

First Place
Contest: (In One monoku #7)-Write what you see or feel
Judged: 2/21/16
Sponsor: Poet Linda/ Poet Destroyer A

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Michael Ainsley

September 7, 2016 at 8:59 PM

Less is more for the imagination to adore! TY;Thalia

Len Gasun

September 23, 2016 at 8:05 AM

Thanks for taking some of your precious time to read my humble work my dear friend, Michael now Thalia. I appreciate it so much.

Len Gasun

September 23, 2016 at 8:05 AM

Hugs

James Inman

March 7, 2016 at 12:10 PM

Lovely image rich write, Leonora.

Len Gasun

March 7, 2016 at 12:35 PM

Thank you my dear friend, James! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 29, 2016 at 8:13 AM

- Bravo, a line of top profit .... well deserved, a wonderful line dear friend Leonora! - Big congratulations !!! - Best wishes for a lovely week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

February 29, 2016 at 9:40 AM

Thanks my dear friend, Anne Lise. It was just maybe my lucky day being on time that day:))) Best wishes to you as well my dear friend!

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2016 at 4:53 PM

so glad this scored high . CONGRATS

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:25 AM

Belated thanks my dear friend, Andrea!

Teddy Kimathi

February 26, 2016 at 5:22 AM

Greetings Galeo. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:24 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend, Teddy!

Arthur Vaso

February 22, 2016 at 11:58 PM

Now thats a lake I would love to discover!!! )

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:22 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Arthur!

Suzanne Delaney

February 22, 2016 at 5:50 PM

Love your Monoku: I believe in Mermaids, too. SuZ

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:21 AM

Thank you so much much my dear friend, Suzannne! Me too believes in mermaids.

Paul Callus

February 22, 2016 at 11:15 AM

Dear Leonora, big congratulations on placing first in the contest...so pleased to be sharing the honour with you:) I can imagine lovely mermaids sitting on those rocks, singing while combing their hair, waiting for love to come their way! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:19 AM

Belated thank you my dear friend, Paul. My honor as well to share with you the winning dais. Hugs back at you!

Bl Devnath

February 22, 2016 at 11:01 AM

Again it's very nice monoku read from you. A great congrats my lovely friend, bl

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:16 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, BL!

Hansteven Selfa

February 22, 2016 at 8:02 AM

Congratulations Galeo on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:15 AM

Thank you dear Hansteven!

Ravi Sathasivam

February 22, 2016 at 1:41 AM

Excellent. Beautiful thought of write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:14 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 21, 2016 at 10:09 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win Galeo.

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:13 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend, Dr. Upma!

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 9:40 PM

Leo, my sweet sis and BFF,, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever Your BFF ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:13 AM

My loving sis and BFF, belated thanks once again for the win and honor. Ok, I'll be there soon. Again, please forgive me for being so late coz of prolonged dental problem. Hugs! Love and miss you forever Sis-BFF!

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 9:37 PM

Hello My dearest SIS and BFF. Not only did I love the title, which was the perfect fit for this contest. I was super happy to see you made the top with the wonderful wonder you shared... Thank you with all my heart.... Forever your BFF... LINDA

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:09 AM

Thank you soo much. Hugs and kisses! Miss you!

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 5:07 AM

Hello My dearest SIS and BFF. Belated thank you so much for appreciating my poem in your contest. I'm so sorry for the very late reply because I felt so uncomfortable the whole week on my gum swelling due to the infected wound. Yesterday got better but this morning when I went to the dentist for a tooth filling, a slight pain again was left. Getting a toothache is too difficult coz it affected the nerves on my face up to my head, whew. Please understand. Again TYTYSM. Btw, what is CM my loving sis?

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 9:38 PM

One thing bothers me about this PAGE... CM.... LINDA