Enchanted

It seems to come alive at night
This house
From the ground up
Dirty and Grimy
While the sun shines 
No life to be seen 
For miles around
But the night
Sparks burst 
Animals reunite 
In longing 
The house  
But only at night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 29, 2016 at 1:21 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brenda. :)
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May 23, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Brenda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 22, 2016 at 7:47 PM
By, the way, this is nice, Brenda , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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May 22, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you!! :) I checked out some of your poems, and I really liked 'Playing Human'. I have 0 experience in poetry, and this is my first time trying to create one myself.
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May 22, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Brenda, sOrry to be the one to tell you, this is not an abc form. No worries it's a common thing with the new poets. You might want to put it under "I don't know." That way it won't confuse the ones looking up the forms. Hugs. Linda
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