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Enchanted

Enchanted in a field of Petals blue, a figure stands And stately stares so true. Lushes greens and mauves Surround this hue; they Carry with them charms That follow you. In your Eyes reflects the golden Sun; that nestles on Mercuric waters run. And miniscule the living Things you be; microcosmic Universal sea! Warmest rays Of sunshine on your smile; Do wake in him fond dreams Of things worthwhile. Listen To the distant shores alive; For on its sands, are ruins To contrive. The figure turns And walks to be with you; Stately stepping through Your petals blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 12:45:00 PM
I was enchanted reading your lovely lines today David.. such a lovely synopsis of color and meaning ... mixed into one.. thankxxx for my cool name on your comment..everyone seems to agree with u too... appreciate your compliments... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:24:00 AM
Awesome write! David! Splendid imagery. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today David. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 5:36:00 AM
very pretty work
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Date: 4/5/2010 4:34:00 AM
Great expressive, emotive, and descriptive write...I can feel love and passion also..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..."Acceptance"..Sara
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Date: 4/4/2010 9:32:00 PM
This is an enchanting poet indeed sprinkled with colored spells,lovely..Charma
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Date: 4/4/2010 9:03:00 PM
An enchanted field of poetry! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:50:00 PM
lovely, reallly enjoyed it
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:17:00 PM
Always a pleasure to read.
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