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Encapsulate An Emotion

Popcorn pops! The bag swells with golden steam. I stop the microwave to top off papa's favorite bowl. Salt christens the glistening treat and I retreat into the family room twilight as papa pushes play. 2019, F 21 encapsulate an emotion contest, sponsored by nina parmenter

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Date: 2/25/2019 6:36:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Jack.
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/26/2019 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Line
Date: 2/24/2019 1:23:00 AM
This is a wonderful, homey piece. I like that you chose 'papa's favorite bowl' and 'golden steam'. A winner! Congratulations!
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/24/2019 6:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrew!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:04:00 PM
Oh, I can't wait! This not only captures the emotion, it's like a Norman Rockwell! Congratulations dear poet!
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/24/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, P.S. it's not often i write about my dad. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/23/2019 9:13:00 PM
Oh I just love the family spirit and the cozy emotions in your poem, Jack. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/24/2019 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 2/23/2019 11:46:00 AM
yum yum. LOVE THIS ONE> Anticipation and pure pleasure is for ME, popcorn and a movie!! Congrats on this joyous write.
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/23/2019 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:59:00 AM
Your clever poem sets up the scene very nicely, Jack! Such an enjoyable emotion of anticipation! Congrats on your win :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/23/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 2/23/2019 9:24:00 AM
Hi Jack, I really enjoyed this one. Congratulations on your 7th place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/23/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis!
Date: 2/23/2019 9:19:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Jack! Janice
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/23/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 2/21/2019 9:20:00 AM
Togetherness. Sounds a a fun winter afternoon or fun night any time of the year. Well done, Jack.
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Jack Webster
Date: 2/21/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thanks, Line!

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