Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Nonet

Enamored

Intense ache of a passionate mind,

                     Rhyming heart can only perceive,

                       Togetherness seems a bliss ,

                            Parting of ways abyss ,

                               Limits undefined,

                               Rhyme or reason,

                                   No hair line,

                                        Savour,

                                          Traps!





Written on 2/6/14
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Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2014 at 3:19 PM I loved the lines that rhymed bliss and abyss. Good luck in the nonet contest! Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 7, 2014 at 3:17 AM Thanks Andrea for the visit n the wishes n beautiful comments !

Paul Callus June 4, 2014 at 11:53 AM Ahhh!....so this is what love entails! It's got its ups and downs...but most important is not to be blind to it; happiness could easily change to pain. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 7, 2014 at 3:16 AM Rightly perceived ,, n happiness everyone cherishes but the pain uncalled for is unbearable Paul // upma// thanks for lovely comments !

Mark J. Halliday June 2, 2014 at 9:29 AM Very good. I particularly liked the 3rd and 4th lines. Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 3, 2014 at 4:19 AM Thanks for the visit Mark ,,, appreciate comments !

Sara Kendrick June 2, 2014 at 9:21 AM Way to go with this creative work..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sara Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 3, 2014 at 4:18 AM Thanks Sara for the visit n the like !