Enabling Failure

Annoying, these crises of goals,
ending with sweet words which consoles,
although a punch could do.
So let us stuff them full of sweet,
until they can’t stand on their feet.
Watch as their plans fall through.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Interesting contest entry..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Brittany. Love Carol
A   Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Brittany., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations Brittany xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 8:03 AM
I like it! Congrats on win.
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Well done! loved the ending.
Harper Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Awesome Brittany, just read about this form and you seem to have captured the spirit of it. Good subject..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace