Empyrean Rapture

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Author's Notes: Suffice it to say that the wondrous words and phrasing in this brief lyrical selection of mine speak amply for themselves. The twenty-eight words comprising this poem, which includes the title too, presents the reader with an immediate powerful word-picture and corresponding imagery that sets the stage for the ultimate spiritual journey of souls as they ascend. The enchanted essence of God's universe is for all to behold. Mankind is part of this too. (Gary Bateman - April 14, 2018) (Lyric)

Theme Categories: allegory, blessing, devotion, faith, god, inspiration, and symbolism.

Empyrean Rapture Radiance sublime God’s true plan Stars bright Heavenly light Angels sing paeans In God’s name Souls ascend Now to arrive On cosmic dust Trails to infinity Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved April 14, 2018 (Lyric)

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/23/2018 5:15:00 AM

A poem that transcends the earthly world displaying a world of beauty, mystery and ecstasy. Insightful and a joy to read.

Gary Bateman
Date: 4/23/2018 6:16:00 AM

Hello Besma, Thanks for your very gracious comment here about my latest lyrical poem. I am very glad that you found it insightful and interesting to read too. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Tahira Parveen

Date: 4/16/2018 3:50:00 PM

What a excellent choice of words, loved it. You should put in on Youtube withsoft music, Gary:)

Gary Bateman
Date: 4/17/2018 1:27:00 PM

Thank Tahira for your read and gracious comment here. (I guess I should look at the soft music option. I will have to see if I can find something appropriate.) Best Wishes, Gary

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/14/2018 7:48:00 AM

and beyond...There's a spirit in it...lovely poem...All the best Gary...

Gary Bateman
Date: 4/15/2018 6:01:00 AM

Thanks Arturo, Sometimes it's possible, as you know, for a writer/poet to find the right tone and tenor for expressing a meaningful message in the fewest words possible. This always makes putting poems like this together, all-the-more fun!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/14/2018 6:12:00 AM

Very serene and peaceful imagery..well done Gary.

Gary Bateman
Date: 4/14/2018 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Vijay!! Appreciate your comment. I liked writing this poem too. Significant meaning, few words too. Best Always, Gary