Empty Womb

never forgotten, never far from my soul- my womb forever empty, my heart but half full. I’ll always remember, your innocence and scent- my Rose in the morn’, heavenly sent. For Contest Rick Parise November 7, 2017
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Michaels Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 6:42 AM
A very touching write, Laura. Interesting that you used the word Morn' as I did, too! Congrats on your win. All the best, John.
Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Very touching. Thank you for sharing. Line xx
Dutta Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Congrats Laura. May God bless.
Barden Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Just gorgeous and so heart-wrenching, Laura ... I have written about this myself, (Too Many Echoes), but a man can never truly empathize. Though I will never know the feeling personally, my heart knows this loss. Beautiful write, my friend ... and I pray for tender healing to your spirit. <3
Warrior Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Congrats!!! Laura...nicely done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Lovely tribute to a sad time. Love especially the second verse. Congrats Luloo!
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:50 AM
A sad emotional write Laura, lovely word usage.
Kinch  Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Sad :( A heaven sent babe stays forever in your heart. Good luck in the contest Laura.
Rees Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Tear-jerking words. Short but sweet. So well said.
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