Empty Till

the words do speak to folk like us, sometimes at 2am the thrill, words rattling round inside my head, till the puter gets its fill, then back to sleep, i will .... and empty till? release. Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Enjoyed this ballad write with its up to date content Don well done.."
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Don, yep been there lots of times...Dave
Sivey Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:53 PM
Yes, this is a fabulous piece of art Don! I really enjoyed every line in your creative write! I do this as well, sometimes it's as late as 4am before I get an epiphany to write something down!! I have a notebook next to my bed just for these occasions! Wonderful poem my friend! Great Work!!
Mac Donald Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 6:53 PM
You've a wealth of ideas, Don! When the you find an "empty till", it will leave room for more to come. Oh, those 2am thrills are worth getting out of bed for. Best wishes, love, Mikki
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