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Quadruple bypass. Kind thoughts and prayers for my Aunt. <3

EMPTY SPACE My eyes look at the empty space My heart aches as the tick tock Takes place A six hour stretch...stretch...stretch
H-aving hope through prayer E-ardrums beat listening to the time A-ching hearts cut out like paper R-ips and tears proclaiming love for her T-ime beats...beats...beats
My mom talks to her twin in twilight hours A womb-dynamic duo Hearts hours apart by phone Squeezing hands Together moist heads pressed...pressed...pressed
T-oo soon old age comes W-ooing I-ntroducing chest pains N-ets catch her before she falls...falls...falls
My eyes look at the empty space My heart aches as the tick tock Takes place A six hour pleading...pleading...pleading 7/25/2017

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Date: 7/25/2017 5:51:00 PM
Very descriptive of how cruelly time passes. Creative and interesting work, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2017 9:27:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. My Aunt had bypass surgery today.
Date: 7/25/2017 10:38:00 AM
How beautiful! Twin Hearts.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2017 12:37:00 PM
For sure :)
Date: 7/25/2017 8:58:00 AM
Kim, What a lovely tribute to both you aunt and your mother. I will remember her in my prayers. So well written! - Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much! Means a lot!

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