Empty Space
EMPTY SPACE
an aesthetic
experience
is the image
nothing
occupies
time& space
contradictions
both
proliferate
&
sit
in counterpoint
the timeframe
is over
then
revived
differently
in continual
inventiveness
slipping
through
our fingers
exploding
the concept
increasingly
participation
controls us
passively
slipping
from
freedom
once more
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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