Empty Rooms

Empty Rooms Aloneness may become an immense - empty room, from which loneliness can come upon us – much to soon on the heels of to much - involved aloneness ! This I have come to know, intimately – I must confess, to touching the fringes of, from time to time, as can be seen, coming out in my attempts at good rhyme. B. J. “A” 2 April 26th 2008

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Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King

Date: 3/11/2013 8:46:00 PM

I know what you mean....I have done long isolation..self imposed. The Rhyme was good though, enough to crack a smile. Thanks for the posted poem Much worth the read

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 3/12/2013 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Scott, for your comments “ Cool ”, “ The Rhyme was good though, ” and for sharing the intimacy associated with your life’s experience. I guess that we, alone “ I have done long, isolation..self imposed ” are not really alone with our alones. Self imposed has never been the choice for me, just old age and circumstance. Then again one can be alone, even in a crowd . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )