Empty Places

Empty places that once were full
Are now my prison walls
The silence seems to mock my pain
As the voice of loneliness calls

The valleys now I wander quiet
The mountains,  all laid low
No way to climb, to be raised up
My heart, no place to go

Broken into a million pieces
Shattered, beyond repair
My journey ends in desolation
No one to meet me there

I hide my eyes to calm my fears
But the screams don't go unheard
Goodbye, is written inside my heart
A hollow and lonely word

A place like this is not quite hell
But it's as close as you can get
Reminded of the day you died
A day I can't forget
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 3:19 PM
Sad and tragic, Larry. Excellent write. Well done. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 12:52 PM
wonderful write, on such a sad topic
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