Empty Nest-Edited

with wings on south wind
soars high with dreams in blue sky
empty nest crumbles

June 21, 2019
Syllable count : 5/7/5
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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:59 PM
great creativity in this one . Congrats on your win.
Mcgee Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:16 AM
this is one of my favorites of the contest. Love your imagery, Subimal. Congratulations.
Gilmour Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 2:56 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful win Subimal. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on your premier win, Subimal. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Love your unique perspective on this topic, Subimal! Congrats on your win! :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest with this lovely haiku with excellent imagery, enjoyed!
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