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Empty House

Searching for a message, one that I could only see. I looked in the closet, hoping for a piece of me. Digging through a wreckage looking for the key. Walking down these hallways, dark and incomplete. Faded paint and broken glass, blood stains cover the floor. Dead grass across a lawn filled with empty spaces. The Clouds above grow closer, as Darkness takes over day. Memories fade as the cold sets in. Alone and Desperate for some hope and faith. We die without knowing of our true fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2014 5:55:00 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, tanner
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Date: 4/17/2014 12:29:00 PM
We all go to that place never finding what we search for, deep thoughts for this write... really drew me in.
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Date: 4/17/2014 7:17:00 AM
A really moving piece this is. Congrats for your featured poem.
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