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Empty Hearts

Precious promises we discarded so slowly one at a time until our hearts were empty a smile we couldn't find Those warm moments meant to always cherish gradually disappeared so subtle did they perish Finally no longer could we pretend as we sadly looked around our love had vanished quietly left without a sound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/4/2009 10:19:00 PM
thank you Joanne Carty
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Date: 6/3/2009 6:20:00 AM
Your title grabbed me and the poem is very thought provoking. The "warm moments" perished and it is like the love was never quite there in the first place, as it had totally vanished after the passing of time.
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