Empty Girl

The rain drops down in sadness,
As the sun departs the light.
Such emptiness and silence,
Death has cursed upon this night.

Whispers fill the silence,
As you leave this dreadful place.
Oh how I wish to feel you,
Wipe the tears right off my face.

Oh how I wish to hear the beauty,
Of your everlasting voice.
Oh how I wish to see your face,
If I only had a choice.

Dear Death, I do beseech you,
To attain my empty soul.
See my life now lacks a purpose,
Because I am no longer whole.

Dear God, I beg for mercy,
Please return my star-crossed love.
The agony strikes through me,
As you look down from up above.

And then I hear you like a dream,
“We will meet again once more,
All you need is trust in God,
To help walk through that peaceful door.”

So I sit there in the silence,
Thinking what just crossed my eye.
No longer will I mourn for you,
No longer will I cry.

My life was based on loving you,
But as you leave this sinful world.
I realize God will see me through,
No need for an empty girl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/9/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mriam. Love Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Mariam. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:39:00 PM
thanks i try :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:22:00 PM
this is deep very deep
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:42:00 PM
appreciate that alot Duke :)
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Date: 10/11/2010 7:08:00 PM
I would like to thank you for your comment. Secondly, I like what you have decided upon here. Yes, you have the power to continue. ************************************** I especially like the suggestion that you had some kind of a vision and a message from your love. That is a marker of your pwerful mind.
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:25:00 AM
thnx carol :)
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:25:00 AM
thnx carol :)
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Date: 9/16/2010 11:25:00 AM
thnx carol! :)
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:43:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Mariam. Hope you have a wonderful day. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2010 6:11:00 PM
thank you for the kind words. <3
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Date: 9/15/2010 5:40:00 PM
powerful write, i love your emotions and feelings expressed here....always Michael
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Date: 9/15/2010 5:02:00 PM
beautiful and deep poem. I'm deeply sorry for your loss.
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:44:00 PM
Very nice poem. Love the last 3 verses. Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:36:00 PM
No need indeed but grief does fade with time. Condolances on your loss. God grant you Peace. Love, Will
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Date: 9/15/2010 4:07:00 PM
a sad and deep write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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