Empty Delusions

luring oasis
sweet source of refreshing life
     naught but a mirage




         14/08/18
water themed haiku contest

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August 15, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Wow.. I loved this one. What a hook!
Watson Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Lyric Man. I hoped that someone would see past the literal meaning!
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:38 AM
very interesting take on the contest theme....so many things in life take on this same aura....well done Wendy
Watson Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, John. Things aren't always what they seem in life!
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August 14, 2018 at 2:16 AM
This is a haiku gem Wendy, Good luck. Tom
Watson Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Very kind, Tom. Thank you as always for the encouragement.
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