Empty Cloud

Lifeless cloud passes over me,
moving it's dark grey shadows.

All alone,
drifting far away.

Slowly disappearing,
misting into the lonely sky,
making the cold afternoon seem sad.

No more rain kissed tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 10:36 PM
Lovely verse Ryan, reminds me life can be like that too.
Jackson Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Thank you my fellow writers :)
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:24 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Reid-Hansen Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 5:48 AM
this is a nice write
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 5:00 AM
Nice observation with fine expressions, ryan
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