Empty Buildings

Abandoned buildings
Along the street row on row
They watch and they wait
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breedt Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 2:09 AM
Hi Darlene, on my first visit to you I exclaim: what a beautiful name! . Your haiku isnt half bad also he he. Thanks for your visit to me. I am reading on...
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Hello Jannie,Thank you.So glad that you like my poem.Please feel free toread on.
Erb Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Deliciously forlorn, pensive
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Hello Eric,Yes it is pensive and forlorn.
Pennell  Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 2:56 PM
sounds like my home town , empty shops
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 10:44 AM
I hope those empty buoldings get filled up soon.People need the stores to shop.It was a sad poem for me to write.
De Burca Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Great Haiku, really enjoyed reading this.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Hello Seosamh thank you for your comment on my poetry.I look forword to reading yours.
Turner Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Feeling a little lonely today, Darlene? Another great haiku.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Hello Daniel The day I wrote this poem I did feel lonely. You picked that out from my poetry! Wow! That was a good guess. I am impressed.
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