Empty Bottle, Empty Soul

There is nothing worse than staring at an empty bottle, 
Figuring out there it has more substance than your moral values.
Nothing more than the all-encompassing emptiness: 
The deafening silence

Peering through the veil of ignorance, Unknowing of even who you are;
Not that anyone will notice you,
Much less remember.

As you crawl upon this earth,
And shrink back inside.
The shroud surrounding you
Covers all to see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thornton Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 2:15 AM
Beautifully put.. excellent pen
Thajudeen Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 1:50 AM
Nice creation I enjoyed much dear poet Collins.Wishes. -Safa
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