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Empty

Eclipsed the deep feelings
Ecstatic glory gone
Effected heart dealing
Effused in no soft tone
Ensnared after enticed
Emboweled with cold ice
Emotions slowly diced  /

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

September 26, 2016 at 3:25 PM

Hi,Sara. WAiting for a new poem. Maybe you are like me. too busy to write. Sure hope I come up with something new soon!!

September 26, 2016 at 3:48 PM

computer is still in the hospital..I hate trying to type on this tablet..LOL..Maybe in a few ..Thanks for dropping by..SK

Afolabi Muideen

September 26, 2016 at 12:45 PM

Thanks for sharing this excellent write.........A.M.

Ravi Sathasivam

September 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM

Sad but beautifully written. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Poet Destroyer A

September 25, 2016 at 12:32 AM

Sara, this is a deep E write... LINDA

September 24, 2016 at 11:12 AM

What a clever poem.! Sad message well told. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

September 23, 2016 at 8:44 PM

This should do well. Thanks for adding my poem to your contest list.

Phyllis Babcock

September 23, 2016 at 4:34 PM

Yes you captured empty very nicely. love phyl

Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2016 at 12:45 AM

Very sad. Congratulations, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2016 at 6:50 PM

wow, you did a great job with your E word. Congrats, Sara.

September 22, 2016 at 3:13 PM

Yes, Sara, I can understand that feeling of emptiness! You describe it so well! ~ Congratulation son this fine win! Regards // paul

September 22, 2016 at 1:40 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara :)

September 22, 2016 at 1:03 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

September 22, 2016 at 1:02 PM

Loved this. A7.......// hugs

Beautiful Scars

September 22, 2016 at 9:40 AM

Sara, very sadly yet beautifully written sweet Sara...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 22, 2016 at 8:14 AM

- Really well written in this form, Sara - Congratulation on your win ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 21, 2016 at 8:52 PM

Sara, a creative, yet sad way to describe "empty". Congrats on your win ! Blessings!

September 20, 2016 at 5:27 PM

A deeply sad poem Sara:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

September 17, 2016 at 3:52 PM

very powerful write, my friend - will call it a day after this comment (the spinning circle is driving me nuts!!!!)

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