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Eclipsed the deep feelings Ecstatic glory gone Effected heart dealing Effused in no soft tone Ensnared after enticed Emboweled with cold ice Emotions slowly diced /

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2016 3:25:00 PM

Hi,Sara. WAiting for a new poem. Maybe you are like me. too busy to write. Sure hope I come up with something new soon!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/26/2016 3:48:00 PM

computer is still in the hospital..I hate trying to type on this tablet..LOL..Maybe in a few ..Thanks for dropping by..SK

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/26/2016 12:45:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this excellent write.........A.M.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/26/2016 7:43:00 AM

Sad but beautifully written. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2016 12:32:00 AM

Sara, this is a deep E write... LINDA

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2016 11:12:00 AM

What a clever poem.! Sad message well told. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2016 8:44:00 PM

This should do well. Thanks for adding my poem to your contest list.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/23/2016 4:34:00 PM

Yes you captured empty very nicely. love phyl

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/23/2016 12:45:00 AM

Very sad. Congratulations, Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2016 6:50:00 PM

wow, you did a great job with your E word. Congrats, Sara.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 3:13:00 PM

Yes, Sara, I can understand that feeling of emptiness! You describe it so well! ~ Congratulation son this fine win! Regards // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2016 1:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2016 1:03:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/22/2016 1:02:00 PM

Loved this. A7.......// hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 9/22/2016 9:40:00 AM

Sara, very sadly yet beautifully written sweet Sara...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 8:14:00 AM

- Really well written in this form, Sara - Congratulation on your win ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2016 8:52:00 PM

Sara, a creative, yet sad way to describe "empty". Congrats on your win ! Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 5:27:00 PM

A deeply sad poem Sara:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 9/17/2016 3:52:00 PM

very powerful write, my friend - will call it a day after this comment (the spinning circle is driving me nuts!!!!)