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Empty

Eclipsed the deep feelings
Ecstatic glory gone
Effected heart dealing
Effused in no soft tone
Ensnared after enticed
Emboweled with cold ice
Emotions slowly diced  /

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/26/2016 3:25:00 PM Hi,Sara. WAiting for a new poem. Maybe you are like me. too busy to write. Sure hope I come up with something new soon!! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/26/2016 3:48:00 PM computer is still in the hospital..I hate trying to type on this tablet..LOL..Maybe in a few ..Thanks for dropping by..SK

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/26/2016 12:45:00 PM Thanks for sharing this excellent write.........A.M. Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/26/2016 7:43:00 AM Sad but beautifully written. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2016 12:32:00 AM Sara, this is a deep E write... LINDA Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 9/24/2016 11:12:00 AM What a clever poem.! Sad message well told. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/23/2016 8:44:00 PM This should do well. Thanks for adding my poem to your contest list. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 9/23/2016 4:34:00 PM Yes you captured empty very nicely. love phyl Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 9/23/2016 12:45:00 AM Very sad. Congratulations, Kai Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2016 6:50:00 PM wow, you did a great job with your E word. Congrats, Sara. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/22/2016 3:13:00 PM Yes, Sara, I can understand that feeling of emptiness! You describe it so well! ~ Congratulation son this fine win! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 9/22/2016 1:40:00 PM Congrats on your win, Sara :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/22/2016 1:03:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Manmath Dalei Date: 9/22/2016 1:02:00 PM Loved this. A7.......// hugs Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 9/22/2016 9:40:00 AM Sara, very sadly yet beautifully written sweet Sara...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/22/2016 8:14:00 AM - Really well written in this form, Sara - Congratulation on your win ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/21/2016 8:52:00 PM Sara, a creative, yet sad way to describe "empty". Congrats on your win ! Blessings! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2016 5:27:00 PM A deeply sad poem Sara:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/17/2016 3:52:00 PM very powerful write, my friend - will call it a day after this comment (the spinning circle is driving me nuts!!!!) Login to Reply