Notes About The Poem

The more stuff we buy, the more crowded our life seems. A crowded life does not lend itself to free thoughts and love for your brain. We all probably have too much clutter as it is, it's ok to get rid of half our stuff.

Empty

Empty is the target,
Empty is the dream.
Empty is the sought after
Beautiful colour scheme.

Empty our life,
Empty our soul.
Empty our house
That’s the goal.

Empty our world,
Empty our bed.
Empty our room
And clean out our head.

Void of clutter,
No more weight.
Void of muck 
And free to create.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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Fame Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Oddly, I enjoyed the repetition and rhyme!
Raynes Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:19 PM
thanks Frankii
Beaty Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:17 PM
I like it. That's where my wife and I have been going these last 10 years.
Raynes Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Thanks Gregg, I think heaps of us are on the same journey.
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