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Empty

What leaves you empty? Waking up feeling like you have nothing When everything is there Surrounded by 100’s of people Still feeling so lonely Frustration fills your soul And you have no reason why When do you know you are empty? Knowing you just want out But cant get to your exit All you see is a tunnel you’re running down But there is no end You feel stranded With no one to save you Even if they wanted too Feeling suffocated How did I get to this point? Where I feel like I have nothing But to everyone looking at me I have everything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 12:30:00 PM
the life of a star is not an easy one. a little rain is needed to show that you are blessed in some areas. a liltle pain to let you know what happiness really is. but i like the way you expressed it. words somany can not even discribe. John H Loving
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:14:00 PM
Beautifully composed...all the best.
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