Empty

Colors fade to black
As the time pass
Looking in
Not looking through
Seeing everything you can do
Want more
But find none
When the day is all but done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dvorkis Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 9:10 PM
sunrise to sunset; cradle to casket. I think that's a lyric from Bright Eyes on their album Fevers and Mirrors. I can't explain why I'm quoting it, I think it has something to do with your title, and how I'm feeling right now.
Ehigiator Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Deep...Good write *Tyesha
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