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Emptiness

by Michaelw1two without valid thoughts one's mind's forgetfulness bleeds useless against time June 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/24/2013 4:32:00 PM
sounds like my stepdad when he got alzheimers. It is a tragic thing.
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michael walkerjohn
Date: 9/24/2013 6:40:00 PM
Aloha Andrea... Thank you for your visit, this read, and your comments... I realize that words do often become symbolic of an experienced event in a lifetime... Alzheimer's, or an individual's conscience, being conscious of the dramatic changes coming to US all... two scary realities... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
Date: 9/24/2013 9:07:00 AM
nice haiku ~always pd
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michael walkerjohn
Date: 9/24/2013 3:32:00 PM
Aloha Linda... Thank you for your visit, this read, and your comments... I appreciate your interest in these posts... and I hope that I will have the time to peruse and establish rapport with you and all of the bards here at ps over the next few months... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
Date: 9/24/2013 4:56:00 AM
Very wise and thought provoking expressions, michael
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michael walkerjohn
Date: 9/24/2013 3:45:00 PM
Aloha Dr. Ram Mehta... It is Quite the honor having you visit... and I thank you for your read, and for your comments on this post... granted, it is rare that such thoughts expose themselves and arrive at this position... on point, and provoking thought... perhaps the many morrows to come will give us more bits of such wisdoms... gathered between the two of us... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.