Emptiness

by Michaelw1two

 without valid thoughts 
 one's mind's forgetfulness bleeds 
 useless against time

June 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:32 PM
sounds like my stepdad when he got alzheimers. It is a tragic thing.
Walkerjohn Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Aloha Andrea... Thank you for your visit, this read, and your comments... I realize that words do often become symbolic of an experienced event in a lifetime... Alzheimer's, or an individual's conscience, being conscious of the dramatic changes coming to US all... two scary realities... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
A   Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 9:07 AM
nice haiku ~always pd
Walkerjohn Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:32 PM
Aloha Linda... Thank you for your visit, this read, and your comments... I appreciate your interest in these posts... and I hope that I will have the time to peruse and establish rapport with you and all of the bards here at ps over the next few months... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
Mehta Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Very wise and thought provoking expressions, michael
Walkerjohn Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Aloha Dr. Ram Mehta... It is Quite the honor having you visit... and I thank you for your read, and for your comments on this post... granted, it is rare that such thoughts expose themselves and arrive at this position... on point, and provoking thought... perhaps the many morrows to come will give us more bits of such wisdoms... gathered between the two of us... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
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