Emptiness

.                              Starvation
                            Strong,     evil
                        Gnawing, bulging, craving
                   Hungry, Voraciousness, greediness, pig
                          Stuffing, gorging, Devouring
                              Bolemia, glutton
                                   Obesity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thomer Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 11:10 AM
a very interesting concept presented here and I loved the style you chose to write it in. it is a very powerful piece. thank you for your comments on my work. --Madison
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 6:27 AM
Nicely done Diamante. Excellent thought behind the writing. Keep writing. Mom
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