Empower

Holy Spirit flow Do empower, stow In my soul; Thy strength furnish Spirit provide might Facilitate heights Cradle 'til the soul flourish Fill the deepest depths Flow across sweet breath Stir within, Holy Spirit Revive, return Friend Lift again, transcend Anoint with Oil make fearless Finis' Inspired by: Verlena S. Walker Contest: Strength Empowers Written: July 22, 2014 It is not a true Tail-Rhyme but sort of an Alouette..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:31:00 PM

Hi Sara, ! A powerful thought and theme... Verlena, has the most outrageous contest on the soup so far. She is awesome. I enjoyed viewing all the winning poems on her list. Congratulations, on making her list... XOX :) LINDA

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2014 7:56:00 PM

Bravo!!! I love this well done!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2014 3:56:00 PM

This is inspired and inspiring, Sara. Very lovely write where faith shines through. Congrats on your merited top win. // paul

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/25/2014 10:54:00 AM

Lovely holy inspiration, Sara. Congrats. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 10:51:00 AM

Superb write Sara ! Loved this form too, Congrats on huge win!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/25/2014 8:17:00 AM

Back again to see your great win my friend! I knew this very fine write would place very high! Huge congrats!!!

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/25/2014 8:02:00 AM

Transcendent, congrats on your win.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/25/2014 4:41:00 AM

Congrats on a great win, sweet Sara!... Empowered by the Holy Spirit!.. Way to go, my sister in Christ!!!!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/24/2014 10:50:00 PM

The bridge you have built is a walking cradle activity. Beautifully written Sara... Congratulations on a winning 1st place in this contest. Verlena :)s.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/23/2014 12:01:00 AM

My friend this is a fine write and sings of the empowerment that faith brings!! BBBRRAAAVVVOOO!!!!!!