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Emplore the Flash Before My Eyes

Flash O mine heart A Shine A brightness Deftly left Behind Shielded from mine eyes Of Ray Leaving the Eternal black Unscathed. ------------------------------ O Prayer Of rainbow red Regret the feelings left unsaid turmoil left within this mind Collapsed the lungs and turned to cries. ----------------------------------------------------- In turn and out Eternal do the angels shout leaving only woe and flash O the blindness I without Realizing without doubt I shall turn to ash Forgotten about.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/25/2010 1:15:00 AM
This poem is intriguing, Michael. It makes me think about a brief, bright joy, a love, that in the end is forgotten. Perhaps without really feeling the depth of happiness that might have been. But it is not lost because...it was never really known. At any rate, You got me thinking... That's good. And the flow of your words captured my attention. This was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. (And thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:28:00 PM
This poem. Is AMAZING. I haven't read anything like this before. it truly is amazing.
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