Empathy

As her eyes fell on the fallen bird
From its nest upon the tree down on ground
Her whole soul for some moments was in shards
The little girl lifted the wounded bird and rested it
In the bowl of her joined palms
She then collected some paste of turmeric
Mixed it with a little slaked lime
As she had seen her mother doing at home
When one got an injury from a fall
She gently rubbed the turmeric-lime paste
On the wings and breast
And placed the bird in a bed of straw in a basket
Out of the blue billowed some cloud
Will the young bird come round she wanted to know
Looked for someone to ask 
The cloud gradually took the shape of Jesus
She comforted the wounded bird and said
He sees us
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May 27, 2016
For Christian Poems - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Christy Teas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/28/2016 9:15:00 AM
This is so beautiful. I am moved.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 5/28/2016 8:52:00 AM
HOw very sweet this is, Probir. Oh, and turmeric is something I have been trying for pain lately. It does not seem to work for me, but I hear it is also good for the brain. So I can only hope it is at least helping me in THAT area!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 10:58:00 AM
Ha ha, thank you...
Date: 5/27/2016 6:35:00 AM
Your poem moved me Probir. Your last line makes it divine! An excellent entry that I hope becomes a top winner! #7. ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/27/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Connie....
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