Empathize Pains and Reflect Joys

(14/03/2013)

My first was only five lines in a pathetic grammar
Scribbled on my mathematic scrap paper
Teacher was explaining about cosinus,
My brain was given a gentle pat by a muse

That muse had a great heart
She taught me to write about love I hadn’t fallen in
She encouraged me to spill some pain when my heart was smiling
From that on we’re never apart

I’ve lived so many lives in my poems
I’ve drowned myself in the deepest ocean to haul the blackest rhyme
I’ve levitated myself to haul sweet words on a colorful cloud
I’ve written fiction lives nothing sweeter than lime
I’ve stacked stories in my mind where words shout out loud

So when you ask me how poetry has become me?
When I know I can empathize pains and reflect joys, that’s how
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 9:29 PM
This is how we all start Dinda...thoughts on scrap paper...lovely poem..congrats....donna
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March 29, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Hi Dinda,, Congratulations in Michale's "How Poetry has become You" contest. This was fascinating. Take care . ~Always*LINDA
Wesley Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 7:50 AM
I have this feeling too Dinda, my poetry reflects the person I am the day I write. Nice to read and know others feel the same way. Love, Lizzie
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 12:06 AM
just amazing Dinda.Wonderful poetry by you.
Haick Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 6:27 PM
I think this is just awesome! Best wishes for Michael's Contest. I'm very busy and can't find my muse right now, LOL. But this is a winner in my book already, Dinda! Always, Annalise
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March 16, 2013 at 8:53 AM
- .... There are many feelings in a poem .... can be difficult to express themselves. - Sad and happy memories come up - tears and smiles. - Happiness and sorrow. - Dinda you are a talented poet, I like your poems a lot - you give of yourself. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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March 15, 2013 at 5:16 PM
"To spill some pain when my heart was smiling"... I absolutely loved this line! I remember a really sunny day, I was very happy and inspired to write something... Yet what I ended up writing was incredibly sad, very much conflicting with my cheery mood... In wondering if you felt the same way on some of your poems? Letting go a different side of yourself you didn't even know was there... Stunning work as usual! I'm adding you to my favorite poets list...
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