Emotive

great emotive poetry ... but we can act the part, subtle is the woe, entreaty, but noble is the art.... thanks Jon, mate.... Don Johnson

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Lizzie Treetop

Date: 1/29/2012 3:26:00 PM

Clever as always Don... Lizzie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 1:12:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Don. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/28/2012 9:31:00 PM

My friend, this is a spectacular write! I loved the excellent meaning of the poem and the great rhyming scheme is very creative! My favorite line is of course the very last one, "...but noble is the art..." wow, now that's great! Awesome Work!!

Judy Ball

Date: 1/28/2012 9:16:00 PM

Beautifully said my fried. I read once that someone said there is no money in poetry but then there is no poetry in money, however if you give me enough money I tend to feel like singing. lol Great write my friend and thannks so much for the clever review. God Bless, JB