Emotions Like Knots

Like a tangled mess, stubborn knots
Emotions like this exist in me a lot
I begin to untangle, starting with ease
Relaxed in the moment, some therapy

Then I get stuck here and there in spots
Following the string in its twisted path
Two steps forward then one step back
Testing how far I will stay on this track

Lots of twisted, turns and loops
Emotions swirling like hula hoops
It’s just a knot, that’s all it is
Why get worked up deep to my core

Emotions are just like a knot at times
Carrying them subconsciously all our life
Taking us on a roller coaster ride
To places we hide, places that are new

Maybe if I dealt with, understood my emotions
Then maybe my knots wouldn’t be so hard to undo!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Posey Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Ah, the beauty of a perfect metaphor. It can apply to so many... Fits me perfectly..... Love ya.... Jake
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 2:44 PM
this is wonderful Shaz, the poetry the theme and the flow of the whole composition and structure is amazing, glad i've seen this...
Cheesman Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 7:40 PM
aaaaw thanks Harry - glad you really enjoyed - Shaz
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 2:47 PM
What a great Metaphor, I enjoyed this tangled ride. As always well done Shaz!
Cheesman Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Rick...Glad you enjoyed :)
Kearley Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:41 AM
:o) A very deep look inside with these words..Very nice.Love it...
Cheesman Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 4:18 AM
Thanks Dan.......you poetry guru you lol - Shaz
Williams Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:32 AM
Shaz, nice metaphors here, I like a lot...David
Cheesman Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 4:12 AM
hey David......Thank you. I'm glad u like a lot :) Shaz
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