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Emotions Like Knots

Like a tangled mess, stubborn knots Emotions like this exist in me a lot I begin to untangle, starting with ease Relaxed in the moment, some therapy Then I get stuck here and there in spots Following the string in its twisted path Two steps forward then one step back Testing how far I will stay on this track Lots of twisted, turns and loops Emotions swirling like hula hoops It’s just a knot, that’s all it is Why get worked up deep to my core Emotions are just like a knot at times Carrying them subconsciously all our life Taking us on a roller coaster ride To places we hide, places that are new Maybe if I dealt with, understood my emotions Then maybe my knots wouldn’t be so hard to undo!

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Date: 3/27/2013 10:57:00 AM
Ah, the beauty of a perfect metaphor. It can apply to so many... Fits me perfectly..... Love ya.... Jake
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Date: 12/6/2012 2:44:00 PM
this is wonderful Shaz, the poetry the theme and the flow of the whole composition and structure is amazing, glad i've seen this...
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/6/2012 7:40:00 PM
aaaaw thanks Harry - glad you really enjoyed - Shaz
Date: 12/3/2012 2:47:00 PM
What a great Metaphor, I enjoyed this tangled ride. As always well done Shaz!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/3/2012 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Rick...Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 12/2/2012 2:41:00 AM
:o) A very deep look inside with these words..Very nice.Love it...
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/2/2012 4:18:00 AM
Thanks Dan.......you poetry guru you lol - Shaz
Date: 12/2/2012 2:32:00 AM
Shaz, nice metaphors here, I like a lot...David
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/2/2012 4:12:00 AM
hey David......Thank you. I'm glad u like a lot :) Shaz

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