EMOTIONS AND ELECTRONS

Torchlight burns low
Currents spark inside my chest
Shadows light the dark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Excellent haïku, Hakim ! Light your way. X.
Mansaray Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Much love....thank you so much
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