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Emotions

Emotions desire to take control, Deep inside, waiting to unfold. Love, so gentle, yet so fierce, Leaves her crushed, and her heart ever-so pierced. Her innocence once blew like a flower in the breeze, But now her soul lies in a ditch, never at ease. First sight's love had her fooled from the start, Living in a dream was unsafe for her heart. Unbearable pain was his gift goodbye, Thinking not of the damage, he left his victim to die. She lye there waiting for her life to be taken, Thought she had no one, but she was mistaken. A glowing pair of eyes were caught in her sight, She attempted getting up with all of her might. The man came closer, gave an edge to her world, Without even knowing, he shed light to the girl. Took her by the hand, gave her a second shot at love, His illuminating vibe appeared as if he were sent from above. The girl gave in to this man's illusion, Thinking not of the pain that her heart was once bruising. She looked deep in the midst of his bewildering eyes, And caught herself breathless with no surprise. She's caught in the whirlpool of emotions to use, ...once again, the love cycle continues.

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Date: 9/13/2010 5:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mariam. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:08:00 PM
Emotions, a nice way to ride the wind. Life has it's way to always make us feel them emotions, no matter the situation. Enjoyed your poem,..p..d
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Date: 9/12/2010 6:20:00 PM
please leave your opinion on this poem :)
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