Meghan Hutchings Poet Rhyme

Emotions

Emotions

Dancing inside, I can feel
Strong emotions, contagious and real
Too much pressure, some break the seal

Call me sad, depressed, lachrymose
Or elated as my happiness grows
Tomorrow, I’ll feel…well, who knows?














Bite Size Poem No. 36
Sponsor Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 12:48 PM totally endearing ~

Arjun Jangid February 22, 2022 at 6:28 AM This rhyme panned beautifully. Impressive, short and amazing. Meghan Hutchings February 23, 2022 at 9:09 AM Thank you so much, Arjun! Your comment is very touching, as I usually feel the rhyme very naturally, so you have confirmed that I did that well in this poem! Thank you so much for your kind compliments! God bless and much love...Meghan

Malabika Ray Choudhury February 19, 2022 at 2:16 PM Congratulations. You have expressed so much in few lines - enjoyed your artistry! Love ~ Mala Meghan Hutchings February 20, 2022 at 9:48 AM Thank you so much, Mala, for your kind comment! I loved this challenge of choosing fewer words to express my message. I truly appreciate your compliment! God bless and much love...Meghan

Meghan Hutchings February 19, 2022 at 1:41 PM Thank you, Line, for the placement! It truly does mean a lot for you to give me a chance! I appreciate the challenge to choose my words wisely due to the length. God bless and much love...Meghan

Alexis Y. February 19, 2022 at 7:46 AM Hi Meghan, You described the kaleidoscope of emotions very well. Congrats on your win. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Meghan Hutchings February 19, 2022 at 1:30 PM Thank you so much, Alexis! Your kind response means a lot to me. I have to admit it was very hard to keep it so short, but I love that challenge! Thanks again! God bless and much love...Meghan

John Watt February 18, 2022 at 11:16 PM Ah, you capture the capricious nature of emotions so well in 6 lines, Meghan. Indeed they are strong and real, and often contagious, and who knows about tomorrow? Loved your rhymes and compact writing with so much truth. This is a winner to me! John Watt February 20, 2022 at 1:54 PM That would be such an honor, Meghan. I save all the encouring comments and soupmails I have received to draw from when the well of self-esteem runs dry. Meghan Hutchings February 19, 2022 at 1:34 PM Thank you so much, John! I want to print out all your responses and create a positive collage that I can look at every time I feel discouraged. Once again, thank you for your support and inspiration! Much love...Meghan