Mystic Rose Rose Poet Haiku

Emotions

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebYd73iPL44&t=1s


emotions are like 
water in the deep ocean 
always receding 

only to pour out  
onto the seashore again  
we are like water  


Jan 12, 2019

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Daniel Schack January 17, 2019 at 10:01 PM water is natures champagne. the soul is the persons .nice write. see mine. comment if u can. be well.

Carolyn Devonshire January 13, 2019 at 5:49 PM A very clever observation, Pixie. We do have emotions that pour forth and then recede, much like the ocean's tides. Excellent haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2019 at 12:25 PM impressed by the sensitivity of your 'ku... flow and row like the sea,pixie...huggs

Caren Krutsinger January 13, 2019 at 10:22 AM Beautiful haiku, Pixie Dust, as usual. You always uplift me. Trixie is blowing you kisses.

Jennifer Proxenos January 13, 2019 at 8:13 AM Well done Pixie Dust, short, clever and to the point. Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer

Heidi Sands January 13, 2019 at 7:46 AM Excellent Haiku! So true. Beautiful :)

Silent One January 13, 2019 at 6:18 AM We should all flow like water.. Two great haiku..