Emotional Dungeon

Oubliette Dark, alone Isolation's naked, truth Lonely hunger, sadness withdrawn Dungeon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Oh, forgot to tell you that I like the design and etc. Mom
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October 5, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Those emotional dungeons are terrible. Keep writing. Mom
W Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 2:44 PM
painful but beautiful...............kate
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October 2, 2009 at 9:19 AM
beautiful. --raiin
Lokken Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 7:31 AM
This metaphor is stunning. So much pain behind these lines....Best wishes, Sara
Freeman Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Great Cinquain Doris. The worse dungeon I know of that we can get ourselves in is the dark abyass of the carnal mind, is this the one you refer to. Smile, love, Sincerely Moses THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT, ALWAY WELCOME AND APPRECIATED
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:30 AM
~~~Magnificent Cinquain Doris~~~ Thank you for your kind comments.Love, Carol
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