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Emotional Dungeon

Oubliette Dark, alone Isolation's naked, truth Lonely hunger, sadness withdrawn Dungeon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/5/2009 10:51:00 AM
Oh, forgot to tell you that I like the design and etc. Mom
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:50:00 AM
Those emotional dungeons are terrible. Keep writing. Mom
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Date: 10/2/2009 2:44:00 PM
painful but beautiful...............kate
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:19:00 AM
beautiful. --raiin
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Date: 10/2/2009 7:31:00 AM
This metaphor is stunning. So much pain behind these lines....Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:44:00 AM
Great Cinquain Doris. The worse dungeon I know of that we can get ourselves in is the dark abyass of the carnal mind, is this the one you refer to. Smile, love, Sincerely Moses THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT, ALWAY WELCOME AND APPRECIATED
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Date: 9/29/2009 11:30:00 AM
~~~Magnificent Cinquain Doris~~~ Thank you for your kind comments.Love, Carol
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