Gordon Mcconnell Poet Rhyme

Emotional Brokenness

Broken like a cup or vase
the emotional self also can break
it's not seen broken as clearly
but feels like an emotional earthquake

So many causes brings such effect
life's traumas causes our cracks
healing seems so far away
meantime we have many lacks

From this brokenness of spirit
comes to take us down
leaving strands within our souls
weak and breathless ready to drown

We cry out for deliverance
despite what we feel inside
seeking to made newly whole
jump on Harley enjoy the ride

Speeding down around the track
emotionally raw going round the bend
wanting to see that winning flag
in one piece reaching the end

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Sara Kendrick October 22, 2014 at 11:51 AM Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work about a very real topic..Sara Gordon Mcconnell October 24, 2014 at 11:13 AM thanks Sara, nice to hear from you and glad you liked it, God bless, Gordon

Liam Mcdaid October 22, 2014 at 8:24 AM oh how i know this feeling gordan very beautifully penned god bless Gordon Mcconnell October 22, 2014 at 11:07 AM thanks Liam, glad you liked it, take care, Gordon

BE Bailey October 22, 2014 at 6:56 AM Gordon...I love this poem. Beautifully written piece and oh so true. Well done my poetry brother :) Warm Regards "B" Gordon Mcconnell October 22, 2014 at 7:05 AM Thanks so much "B", glad it impressed you, trust you're having nice morning, here we're into early afternoon and pretty wet. God bless, Gordon