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Emotional Brokenness

Broken like a cup or vase the emotional self also can break it's not seen broken as clearly but feels like an emotional earthquake So many causes brings such effect life's traumas causes our cracks healing seems so far away meantime we have many lacks From this brokenness of spirit comes to take us down leaving strands within our souls weak and breathless ready to drown We cry out for deliverance despite what we feel inside seeking to made newly whole jump on Harley enjoy the ride Speeding down around the track emotionally raw going round the bend wanting to see that winning flag in one piece reaching the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/22/2014 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work about a very real topic..Sara
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/24/2014 11:13:00 AM
thanks Sara, nice to hear from you and glad you liked it, God bless, Gordon
Date: 10/22/2014 8:24:00 AM
oh how i know this feeling gordan very beautifully penned god bless
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/22/2014 11:07:00 AM
thanks Liam, glad you liked it, take care, Gordon
Date: 10/22/2014 6:56:00 AM
Gordon...I love this poem. Beautifully written piece and oh so true. Well done my poetry brother :) Warm Regards "B"
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/22/2014 7:05:00 AM
Thanks so much "B", glad it impressed you, trust you're having nice morning, here we're into early afternoon and pretty wet. God bless, Gordon

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