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Emminent Death

Helplessly she lies
waiting for deliverance
from eminent death

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Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2010 at 9:44 AM

Interesting Haiku...Evokes many questions..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 17, 2010 at 12:29 PM

Such a striking write, Jimmy--just a note on the spelling for "imminent"--aside from that, such a powerful write...& thank you for always dropping by my poems...:)

Kim Hilliker

May 15, 2010 at 5:10 PM

Sad Haiku. May God bless her soul.

Iolanda Scripca

May 13, 2010 at 4:55 PM

great Haiku here. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your nice comment. All the very best, Iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 13, 2010 at 4:22 PM

So sad yet true Jimmy .your words have described the photo perfectly and good luck in the new contest... as always ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. a sad tragedy ...