Jen H. Poet Haiku

Emergency

My emergency
Can't breathe, Light headed, Doctor
Lay down... Beep, beep, beep
















Yesterday, I had a little trouble breathing when I was out at soccer... I had to go to the ER and everything was 
spinning and flying by me.  It was scary, but I survived.  Just like my favorite teacher says, "There's no point in 
crying... you either die, and then your dead and don't feel it.  Or you live to see another day and pray that this 
never happens again."

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Alli B. March 27, 2009 at 1:06 PM Jen when Peyton told me what happened on Wednesday morning I think it was....I was terrified...I'm so thankful that your alright. Great write...-AlLi

Maryam Jameela Haniff March 26, 2009 at 1:21 PM oh Jen I'm so sry..but I'm happy ur okay again..lots of love Maryam~

Abe Lopez March 25, 2009 at 8:58 PM your teacher has a way with words and wisdom. very nice write!

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2009 at 7:27 PM Gee, Jen, I'm sorry you had such a scare. The poem was very intriguing; I could see it happening. Glad you're ok and able to write great poetry again!