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Emergency

My emergency Can't breathe, Light headed, Doctor Lay down... Beep, beep, beep Yesterday, I had a little trouble breathing when I was out at soccer... I had to go to the ER and everything was spinning and flying by me. It was scary, but I survived. Just like my favorite teacher says, "There's no point in crying... you either die, and then your dead and don't feel it. Or you live to see another day and pray that this never happens again."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/27/2009 1:06:00 PM
Jen when Peyton told me what happened on Wednesday morning I think it was....I was terrified...I'm so thankful that your alright. Great write...-AlLi
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Date: 3/26/2009 1:21:00 PM
oh Jen I'm so sry..but I'm happy ur okay again..lots of love Maryam~
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:58:00 PM
your teacher has a way with words and wisdom. very nice write!
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:27:00 PM
Gee, Jen, I'm sorry you had such a scare. The poem was very intriguing; I could see it happening. Glad you're ok and able to write great poetry again!
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