emerge

rain lilies emerge
pink blossoms draw bees to feed....
hummingbirds wheeze by

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Paul Callus

July 27, 2024 at 2:43 PM

You have created a delightful image, Sara. Usually both bees and hummingbirds go after nectar, though they'd prefer to do that separately in order to avoid confrontation! ~ Regards and good evening // paul

Sara Kendrick

July 28, 2024 at 3:19 AM

Paul, yes, I would think that they would not be feeding from the same plant at the same time. Hummingbirds are not drawn to the rain lilies for some reason, maybe the color is not the right color to draw them. I appreciate your visit and taking time to comment. Sara K